D.H. Lawrence on Galsworthy part 1

in 1998 i purchased Galsworthy's "A Modern Comedy" at a street market in Nice, France.  Inside were these letters. It is an exegesis on the book and on Galsworthy. I have yet to authenticate if these were actually written by D.H. Lawrence.
text:

John Galsworthy

by D.H. Lawrence

     All the critical twiddle-twaddle about style and form, and this pseudo-scientific classifying and analysing of books in an imitation-botanical fashion, is mere impertinence and mostly dull jargon.

     The touchstone is emotion not reason. (?)

Macaulay juggles his feelings (thought he is emotionally very alive)

Sainte Beuve remains a great critic (a man of good faith)

Pater's standard was the lonely philospher of pure thought and pure aesthetic truth

We need a standard to go by and judge

We need some conception of a real man and a real woman by which to judge all these Forsytes

Standards -- The good man

                    the man of pure thought
                    the treasured humble
                    the moral individual
none of the Forsytes seems to be a really vivid human being they are social beings.
they have lost individual caste and humanity (animality?) 
                    animality = freeman's psyche = innocence = naivete
                    sociality = slave's psyche
Money doesn't touch the freeman it goes right through the centre with the social being a split personality with the death of the individual soul
a castrated man      the "at-oneness"
What is salvation is God
Hence money is God
the social being has lost his innocence
the bright little individual spar of his at-oneness